Gone

Posted on October 6, 2012 by

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Triefextra Week 36 (www.Trifectawritingchallenge.com)

 

Like the Banyan Tree, she began humbly.

Strong seedling

Until Suckers, uncontrolled, obliterated her withering core

Pushing her inward … Forcing her out …

Indistinguishable now

Amid the tangle of torturous tendrils.

She is gone!

Category: Introspection

7 Comments on “Gone”

  4. Wow. Depending on how one reads into this, yours is the female version of mine. Good job. And if I am reading into it correctly I that you were able to convey it without saying it.

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